miércoles, 30 de junio de 2021

AN OPINION ESSAY

Currently the use of electronic gadgets since we are a young child is very common. Today the children usually have smartphones, computers, videogames and other things which the can spend time and have fun. However the electronic gadgets can be good for the mental developing of young child, it can be bad too, especially when the parents leave to their children spent all the day using this things.

It seems to me that it has taken part of the daily life because currently almost all people have a smartphone and we are connected to socials media everywhere, even thought when we are in a family meeting. In my view many teenagers prefer to use their smartphones or play a videogame instead to spend time with their families. In my opinion it is because the most of parents consider more important the work or another things, and in their free time the prefer rest or even though they prefer use their electronic gadgets too instead to be with their children.

I suggest that is very important set limits for each member of the family respect to the time that everyone spend in their electronic gadgets and of this way start new hobbies which include all family members. Furthermore, all people know the excessive use of electronic gadgets is bad for health, because of this, one solution might be that in the schools the teachers teach to the teenagers about the disadvantages and risks of use the electronic gadgets for many time.  

In conclusion the excessive use of the electronic gadgets is ending with the value of family relationship and is important that we all know about the risk of this gadgets. It seems to me that make a change must start for the parents and of this way the children could see the example and do it too.

-José Luis Celis Gutiérrez 



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